I have chosen to
rewrite my second essay. So far, I have done a lot of things to edit
my paper. I have been going through the entire paper
and doing all the grammatical revisions that need to be dealt with.
The next thing that I did was organize the paragraphs better.
I went through and picked apart each paragraph individually and made
sure that what I talked about in the topic sentence was what was being
discussed in the paragraph.
I also updated my thesis and made it much stronger than before.
I reworked pretty much every topic sentence along with all of my ending
sentences. There were a few quotes that I had used in my
paper that were too long. I cut them down and added more of my voice
then the original piece. I also added more details to each paragraph
and really focused on trying to make it sound more like a rhetorical analysis
piece. I hardest part that I have in reworking this
paper is the organization part. I need to stay on track and really practice
my organization skills. I know that if I
keep working hard on this essay and continue to make improvements, this essay
will be a really good one.
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